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Journal Entry: Thu May 8, 2008, 8:31 AM
In Chapter 9 Demon Dimension
All of the males in this dimension has a female counterpart in the Demon Dimension. All of the females in this dimension has a male counterpart in the Demon Dimension. We called this Demon Dimsion. All of the rogue ninjas in this dimension has a good ninja counterpart in the Demon Dimension.
Good ninjas in this dimension has rogue counterpart in the Demon Dimension.
In the Demon Dimension are spelled backwards.
How would you think those conterparts react?
Examples:
Aburame Shibi=Emaruba Ibihs (F)
Aburame Shino= Emaruba Onihs (F)
Akimichi Chouji= Ihcimika Ijuohc (F)
Akimichi Chouza= Ihcimika Azuohc (F)
Ebisu=Usibe (F)
Gaara=Araag (F)
Gekkou Hayate=Uokkeg Etayah (F)
Haku=Ukah (F)
Hagane Kotetsu=Enagah Ustetok (F)
Haruno Sakura=Onurah Arukas (M)
Hatake Kakashi=Ekatah Ihsakak (F)
Hyuuga Hinata=Aguuyh Atanih (M)
Hyuuga Neji=Aguuyh Ijen (F)
Inuzuka Hana=Akuzuni Anah (M)
Inuzuka Tsume=Akuzuni Emust (M)
Inuzuka Kiba=Akuzuni Abik (F)
Akamaru=Uramaka (F)
Jiraya=Ayarij (F)
Kamizuki Izumo=Ikuzimak Omuzi (F)
Kankurou=Uoruknak (F)
Mighty Guy=Tighty Yug (F)
Mitarashi Anko=Ihsaratim Okna (M)
Mitokado Homura=Odakotim Arumoh (F)
Momochi Zabuza=Ihcomom Azubaz (F)
Morino Ibiki=Onirom Ikibi (F)
Orochimaru=Uramihcoro (F)
Rock Lee=Kcor Eel (F)
Sai=Ias (F)
Sarutobi Asuma=Iboturas Amusa (F)
Shiranui Genma=Iunarihs Amneg (F)
Shizune=Enuzhis (M)
Suzume Namida=Emuzus Adiman (M)
Temari=Iramet (M)
Tenten=Netnet (M)
Tsubaki=Ikabust (M)
Tsunade=Edanust (M)
Touji Mizuki=Ijuot Ikuzim (F)
Uchiha Sasuke= Ahihcu Ekusas (F)
Uchiha Itachi= Ahihcu Ihcati (F)
Umino Iruka=Onimu Akuri (F)
Uzuki Yuugao=Ikuzu Oaguuy (M)
Uzumaki Naruto=Ikamuzu Oturan (F)
Yakushi Kabuto=Ihsukay Otubak (F)
Yamanaka Ino=Akanamay Oni (M)
Yamanaka Inoichi=Akanamay Ihcioni (F)
Yamato=Otamay (F)
Yuuhi Kurenai=Ihuuy Ianeruk (M)
any suggestions for me to contunie the fan-fiction?
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*podrás destruir mi cuerpo, todo menos mis manos*
*it can happen something bad to all my body, everything to him except my hands*
if you want some critiques, there might be too many characters to deal with. I think you should've chosen a number of characters and then created a fanfic from them. Too many characters in one story all at once would confuse a reader. And becuase some of then are smaller secondary characters, it might be hard for some people to remember all of them form the actual manga plot.
Also, a good thing to do is to go to the next line for every time a new person says something.
Indent new paragraphs and use correct punctuation. It always helps a reader when the text is clearer to read
Just some suggestions
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"DON'T BELIEVE WHAT PEOPLE SAY!"
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I just wanted to say thanks for the fav!!!!
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